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The Albatross

Sleeping quietly amongst the zephyrs the albatross flys
breathing deeply with heavy sighs
He wakes with a startle and lands on a rocky crag
within the mountains cave his mate waits
With 10 warm eggs lying crudely like helpless bait

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  • Dienush
    February 17

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    I clicked on this because I like albatross - the word and the bird. Your use of vocabulary is pretty good and this poem is different, but I think you should re-check some of your spelling because you have several errors. Other than that, it's an interesting image, especially the last line.

    ~Diana