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Old Age

I stand here
hunched over
because of all the time
behind me is weighing me down.
my face is wrinkled because of
all the laughs and the cries
and all the days i didnt feel like living.
my bones are brittle
because of my mistakes early on in life
but my heart is as strong as ever
because of your love.

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  • darlintlc silver member
    February 23

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    Oh the story our face can tell...the life we have led and the love's and pain we have felt!

    thanks for entering


  • Rovingone gold member
    February 16
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    Very sentimental and sweet. This is a nice poem.