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Con: Happy Valentine's Day!! by Poet Muse



Rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrroses are red,
  here take this candy.

Hurry up and down them chocolates,
  so we can get randy!




A contest entry

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    February 20

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    Your Muse is a Craic!! - Irish Gaelic meaning, "a Hoot"

    Thank you for your comedic Valentine's Day entry in my contest!! I'm wishing you all the best!! Peace, xx Cyn


  • redhanded
    February 20

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    roses are red
    valentines was great

    I ate 10 sex choclates from hustler
    boyyyy what a date