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Shivers

Rolling from the nape of my neck to my toes
Your lips upon me bring forth wonders I can't see
Full of love and lust
Twining and intertwining
In and out of the hairs you tickle on my neck
Your whiskers divine pleasure upon my skin

Eyes closed, I can envision your fingertips
Gently caressing my lips
As your body draws me toward your heat
My skin flushes beneath your gentle caress
Chest heaving as I lose my breath and find it again
In your fiery embrace I am lost and found over and over

Open my eyes to your gaze
As you dine upon the pleasure running over my face
Limbs trembling with need
Reaching for your desires
Drawing you closer than physics would ever allow
Within me you are reborn

Friends extreme
Lovers supreme
While the miles may separate us
This bond will never be lost
Others shall comfort our mind and body
Secure in the actuality that
Our friendship will recreate the moon and the stars

Author notes

"no one has to know i'm your getaway" Can you keep a secret? THE CAB

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  • Ellis gold member
    August 5
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    Good Read


  • SilverSea
    February 16

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    Great interpretation of the prompt. Brilliant imagery. . . things like the lines "drawing you closer than physics would ever allow." And it's passionate without being too . . . you know. Great job!


    • alaskanamber
      February 16

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      thanks

      I tried to keep it P. C. but the prompt caught my attention and it reminded me of friends and lovers. Like oil and water in a glass. When you leave it alone they separate. But shake it up and they are like one fluid.