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Myself

As I lay secreted behind the facade

of careless indifference

flowing with nots and whatifs

You reached out with words
Logic appealing to my soul
That nonchalant confidence
Id aligned, Ego erect
At peace with the universe
Inhaling truth, my chrysalis is breached
Sparking rebirth, inner self acknowledged

So simple when embraced
Limitless possibilities
I stand before the world

Drawing strength from within







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  • Balldinger silver member
    April 17

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    you, U, ewe...

    where there is earth curvature, there is a "lost dogs & mixed blessings" (John Prine). at the edge of the turncoat, there are concoctions so strong a light saber melts in a mind wave of Freudian slips and Jungian translations. Limitless possibilites, indeed..


  • JinSays gold member
    February 24

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    Wonderful. At peace with the universe.
    I think you did an outstanding job with this prompt, and I wish you all the best.
    Love,
    jin


  • IronMaiden1236
    February 16
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    OMG!!

    FLY Butterfly FLY~~~~