My beautiful Saturn
Princess Maloka, the most beautiful girl
And her best friends, who by chance are faries
Bethany, Milania, Victania,
Georgia, Tatiana, Nelena.
The realms of the world
With glamorous trees, and elves
Forest sprites, lightness
A castle made entirely of gingerbread
Maloka's castle.
Underneath the green bridge
Lies a darker world
Depression, despair
Maloka's nightmare
Never realm into that horrid place
Or your own dreams you can never chase.
My wonderful Saturn, in all it's grace.
Author notes
I wrote a story about Saturn...This is a small summary of it's inhabitants.
A contest entry
- Make a New World by Sunshine Princess.
850 points, ended February 20, 2009, 14 entries
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I like your poem even in the nicest places I guess there is always something dark and scary thank you have nice day.
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