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Her Scars...Her Secret

A mother's betrayal is the most unbelievable pain
Anyone could endure...
So why did she do the things she did to your family?
She was the reason, the truth is unveiled.

A father who seemed too insecure, too controlling
Is now the victim of a series of truth
He can never know...
He will never know...

How horrid.

Baby, let me steal your tears away
Let me curse her and show her
What she's done to you...

What real lessons she is teaching...

Adultery...
The true whore

It's...unbearable.

Author notes

My fiance just found out today that his mother had an affair before the divorce with his father went through....

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  • StormyDawn
    February 19
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    A very good job with this. I am so sorry about your fience. Thank you for sharing this. I know if was probably hard writing about someone you care about dearly. (that takes courage!) Best of luck!!


  • HisPrincessMaloka
    February 19
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    I have found it so hard to do this prompt, I've worked really hard on it...is there any way to give me a new one?


    • StormyDawn
      February 19
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      okay...how about writing a poem about a secret that either you or someone you know has

  • StormyDawn
    February 16

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    Your prompt is to write a poem about your favorite holiday...and the holiday can be real or imaginary. Have fun, thanks for entering, and best of luck!


    • HisPrincessMaloka
      February 16
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      Awesome! Sounds like a really fun prompt! I'll have it posted by the end of the night.

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