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eclipse

if anything,
he's not a monster
he's not a man
however he is real

i didn't just dream him
i didn't just make him up
he's alive in my mind
and in my heart

my body is longing
to hear his voice
to feel the stillness
of his breath

my mind yearns
for his return
to look into his eyes
upon his sparkling face

alas i die
with each passing day
haft of me is gone
and only the shell remains

Author notes

this is written from Bella's point of view in the book eclipse

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  • SingMeToSleep
    March 2

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    I like this poem. I think it would be more fitting for New Moon than Eclipse, though. Also, there were a few spelling errors.

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