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Clouds of gold and white

In the distance of my mind,
I imagine time.
Time is near, time is here
Time is a picture clear.

In the corners of my thoughts,
clouds of gold and white.
and soft feathers
as these birds flock together.
This, the picture of time
against the walls of my mind.

In this I see forever
Something that will never
ever be gone
out of sight
out of mind
Not until the end of time.

Even if all human kind disappear.
Forever out of time.
The birds still sing
joyously ring
in the clouds of gold and white.

Even if all time is gone
this picture in this dream of mine
will forever stay a part of me.
Never shall it fade away...
Even at the end of time...
Clouds of gold and white, this is time.

Author notes

I just quickly jotted this down. Art work in contest by Gilbert Williams

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  • ShelleyA gold member
    March 10

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    A good write and interpretation of the picture prompt. Good imagery, flow and tone. Nice rhyme and rhythm. Lovely depth of feeling. Nice use of repetition. Thank you for your entry.


  • thepoetssoul
    February 17

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    This is a fantastic piece of poetry.The rhyme and rhythm is in exellent form.Splendidly written in vivid colour and taste.Be blessed in all you do.

    Tony