When ever we go out dancing,
it takes a while to get me going.
But in a while I’m feeling great,
and my shyness is not showing.
As those shooters keep on coming,
girl you sure look good to me.
The more I drink the more fun I am,
and the more gorgeous you seen to be.
Your smile always gets much sweeter,
and your laughter turns me on.
Just like when we first got married,
I can’t wait to get you home.
When we’re dancing they move aside,
as I swing you all about.
Most of them stand aside and clap,
and they whistle and they shout.
When it comes to razing hell,
and just out right having fun.
Go get you some tequila,
and Jose Quervo is the one.
P.N.
A contest entry
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1400 points, ended February 20, 2009, 17 entries
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Comments
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They always say the girls get prettier at closing time...funny...
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cute haha we women think the same after a gallon of booze men look less hairy and fat too heheheh
hugs
xx
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you have a magnificent sense of humor. humor is a most sensuous thing so in that respect, this is a sensual write.
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This is so good and so hilarious. I think a good drop of anything is enough to make anyone look bonza! I think shyness certainly is something that most would start out with...but wait until that booze takes its effect. You wrote a great amusing piece that really had the funny bone going. Thanks for the wonderful read.
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FUNNY!
First of all, I just have to say that I love the picture you choose for this! Very clever and fun!
The poem itself was great! It painted a very intresting little story of people having a very good time out on the town. Over all, yet another masterpeice! Good luck in thine contest! :-)
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Very Funny My Friend
You always know how to make us smile with your poems.
I guess the closer it gets to closing time and the more guys drink they loose all senses . Best of luck. You take care, Sandy 
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FANTASTIC!
This is the funniest write. the pic is so perfect. Thank you so much for this write. I am laughing my A$% off. This was just perfect
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Great pic !!
A wonderful poem...you sure know how to kick your heels up after 1 or 2 tequila's...ha ha.!!!
A fun write, that I enjoyed reading.
Very well done.
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This is absolutely a wonderful piece. Reminds me of a song *I married a waitress and I dont know her name, shes missing her front teeth and so on...."
LMAO
Ilove it
Thanks for your entry
Passions
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