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Her Feast

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Her firm sweaty breasts slide upon his chest as she mounts

her man in her quest to quench her thirst, the lust she has

for him will not be denied this night. Their lips lock as they

embrace, holding his face with both hands she forcefully sucks his tongue, their tongues entwine in her mouth.

♥ 

Moving down his chest she nips his nipples with her teeth,

causing him to wince in pain and pleasure, she smiles. Quickly she slides down taking his hard shaft into her mouth, she plunges down on it forcing him deep within her throat. In delightful pleasure, he moans as she takes him again and again.

Rising up and straddling him, she knows what she wants and she will take it now, reaching back placing him at the entrance to her cavern she lowers herself onto him. Placing her hands on his chest pinching his nipples she starts rocking her hips while she feels his shaft moving back and forth inside her, she laughs.

Firmly grasping her breasts in his hands, her hard nipples protrude between his fingers he pinches them and watches her pleasure as he squeezes. Pushing her breasts against his hands for leverage, she grabs his arms, their sweaty bodies gliding on one another in a rhythm of increasingly desperate pleasure.

As climax nears, their faces contorting from ecstasy their bodies in a frenzy of motion, she throws her head back and cries out. As he explodes inside her, he makes one final thrust and releases a growl from deep within, that can only be delineated as primal. Her wet trembling body slides off of his, as they lay side by side basking in the afterglow of her feast, they sleep.

 

 

 

Author notes

By ~ Maxboy
Background By ~ Riftkin
Picture Credit~http://media.photobucket.com/image/sex/laurli_x3/sex/sex.jpg?o=0

Picture Is The Prompt


Gold, Bronze, HM(4)

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  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    August 1
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    excellent

    A feast indeed
    Congrats on the trophys
    Hugs
    Your lil sis
    Susan~~~~


  • cybilseyes silver member
    July 5
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    And a feast to the eyes as well thanks for your entry!
    cyb


    • Maxboy gold member
      July 10
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am very pleased you enjoyed my write.


  • My mother made your background.


    • Maxboy gold member
      July 2
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      A beautiful background, she does great work, backgrounds and poetry.


  • I thought this amazing poem looked familiar. lol
    Again, I loved this poem, I think I loved it even more the second time around
    Favorite lines
    "As climax nears, their faces contorting from ecstasy their bodies in a frenzy of motion, she throws her head back and cries out. As he explodes inside her, he makes one final thrust and releases a growl from deep within, that can only be delineated as primal. "

    Perfection
    ~Serenity

    • Maxboy gold member
      July 8
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      I am sorry, I didn't realize you had seen this one before, but thank you for your wonderful comment of enjoying it the second time.



  • Antebellum
    June 25

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    this is nice.
    Im not one thats into eroica, but I must say, this was a wonderful write.
    It's sensual.

    a wonderful take on the picture.
    good luck


    • Maxboy gold member
      June 29
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • ladybug.
    June 23

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    I think the only thing I have to say is -- wow. This is incredibly well thought out & so poetic in an erotic way.
    Thank you for sharing.


    • Maxboy gold member
      June 25
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      Thank you very much for your beautifuk comment, I am very happy you enjoyed my write.


  • breath taking and devine absolute please to read and emerse in your a sinsay in this art .

    • Maxboy gold member
      June 14
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      Thank you so much Glenn, I am pleased you enjoy my writes, but you do give me to much credit. But Thank You!


  • amazing image painted in my head. i could see every moment from start to finish ans it was just incredible...GL


    • Maxboy gold member
      June 15
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.


  • Excellent. It was greatly painted in the mind of the reader- you didn't leave too much to the wandering mind but at the same time you just helped the imagination grow . Well done, thanks for entering.


    • Maxboy gold member
      June 14
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.


  • Can someone say HOT?! This poem was so steamy and sensual, I can say that you have disrupted my day, entirely. A cold shower would not help me in this moment! Ohmy this was an excellent poem. Great sensual imagery, GREAT GREAT GREAT. I absolutely loved it. I love the erotic tension, how you kept me intrigued.

    " As he explodes inside her, he makes one final thrust and releases a growl from deep within, that can only be delineated as primal."

    Mmmm mmm mmm! I loved this part. Great job again!
    Thank you for such a great write, as well as entering it. Good luck!

    • Maxboy gold member
      June 10
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      Thank you so much for the Honorable Mention, but I am most pleased about you enjoying my write.

      Thanks Again

  • Congratz finalist.

    I love how well the pic fits....
    Ok so straight off the bat, Its like BAM....I see a vicious, horny woman, taking what she wants.
    Then in stanza 2 she gives a little back.....
    Then theirs desire and NEED felt in the absence of foreplay. she gets straight to business and he is loving it....
    I like how he toys with her breasts like....what the hell else can I do but sit here....OOOH BOOBIES...
    I like how they both exhibit animal like qualities durring climax and then calmly just....sleep....Good job

    • Maxboy gold member
      May 28
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      Thank you so much for the Honorable Mention and your wonderful and fun comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.

      "what the hell else can I do but sit here....OOOH BOOBIES..." hahaha

      You are funny girl.
      Thank You



  • KelsBabez
    May 22
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    Thats amazing
    wonderful
    good luck


    • Maxboy gold member
      June 11
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      Thank you very much for the applause and great comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.


  • excellent~

    Whew
    I think I need to turn up the A/C after reading this or throw hubby on the bed
    Very erotic images formed in my head
    Best of luck in the contest
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~


    • Maxboy gold member
      May 14
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      Thank you so much sweetie, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.

      Thanks Sis

  • sooooo hot! I was blushing like mad through out this. You did a sexy little job on this.



    The Positives:

    So erotic and so descriptive and imaginative

    Room For Improvement:
    Nothing I can see you did wonderful



    My Favorite Part:
    Firmly grasping her breasts in his hands, her hard nipples protrude between his fingers he pinches them and watches her pleasure as he squeezes. Pushing her breasts against his hands for leverage, she grabs his arms, their sweaty bodies gliding on one another in a rhythm of increasingly desperate pleasure.


    i think you made everyone wet with this one
    Overall:

    I give this an 8/10 you did great. I hope to see you in my future contests thanks so much for entering.

    ~*~Apathetic Poison~*~


    • Maxboy gold member
      May 11
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      Thank you very much for your beautiful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.


  • damn that was a nice write. i really enjoyed reading this piece. Keep up your amazing work! best of luck.

    CrimsonViper


    • Maxboy gold member
      May 8
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • Ice Queen
    May 5

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    Very Erotic and hot. It honestly turned me on. I like it, wonderfully penned and good job! Thanks for entering and teh best of luck to you in my contest.

    • Maxboy gold member
      May 17
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      !!! Ohhhhh WOW !!!

      Thank you ever so much for the Gold Trophy, but most of all, I am very pleased you enjoyed my writes.

      Thanks Again

  • It's very erotic and hot piece.
    I enjoyed reading this.
    Thank you for entering, good luck!


    • Maxboy gold member
      May 13
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • SubKitten
    April 29
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    This doesn't read like a poem at all -- It reads as a story. The only thing that makes it remotely similar to a poem is that it's broken up into what could be considered stanzas, but even those are more like paragraphs. That being said, it was very well written and erotic.

  • Well indeed a passionate piece full of
    passion and desire...yes...well penned indeed.

    Good luck

    Passions


    • Maxboy gold member
      April 28
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.

      Thanks Sis

  • Hot.
    I want to be done like this.


    • Maxboy gold member
      April 24
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      Thank you for your beautiful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write and hope your wish comes true.



  • Riftkin gold member
    April 17

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    I enjoyed this poem of yours..
    and want to wish you the best
    with it in my contest.

    As your words have proven to be
    worthy of reading by me and all others.

    Riftkin

    • Maxboy gold member
      April 17
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      Thank you so much for the Honorable Mention and your wonderful comment girl, I am pleased you enjoyed my write. Thank you for the use of your wonderful background.



  • Umi Juvariel
    April 9

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    Some of the lines here felt as if they were rushing, and a little forced. You had a little too much repetition where it did not need to be. Maybe if this piece were a little slowed down, the wonderful passion you portray here could show to the utmost of it's ability. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.


    • Maxboy gold member
      April 9
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    March 31
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    excellent~

    Very hot sensual and full of lust......
    I need a fan on now
    Best of luck in the contest....
    Congrats on the Green Trophy you got in a former contest
    This looks like a winner to me whoweeeeeeeee
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~


    • Maxboy gold member
      March 31
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment sis, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.

      Thanks Sis
      Bro


  • condor gold member
    March 28

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    I am not one for reading erotica or the like, but i must say you did a magnificent job on this piece. You managed to capture the atmasphere of the moment with great emotion and delivered a wonderful read that left nothing to the imagination. I wish you the very best in the contest.


    • Maxboy gold member
      March 29
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment sweetie, I hope I didn't shock you to much.



  • Reanna Eryn
    March 24
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    Amazing, lovely!

  • oh simply amazing.
    loved this. Thanks for sending me the links hon.

    and nice bg...didnt know joanne did these as well.

    Congrats on HM

    Passions


    • Maxboy gold member
      March 24
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment sweetie, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • jul
    March 23
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    Very Hot!!! I love this one. Good luck to you. Thanks for entering the contest

    • Maxboy gold member
      April 2
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      !!! WOW !!!

      Thank you very much for the Bronze Trophy and your wonderful comment, but I am most pleased that you enjoyed my write so much.

      Thanks Again

  • Wow! Amazing write! I loved it. Background is sexy!


    • Maxboy gold member
      March 5
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      Thank you very much for the wonderful comment and applause, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • Swangrnv gold member
    March 4

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    Golly good gosh!!

    whew! i thought this would be something, but damn...this was SOMETHING ELSE!! l.o.l. wow, good stuff sir!


    • Maxboy gold member
      March 4
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment and applause, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.

      Thanks


  • doolie gold member
    February 18

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    OH MY!!! I think I've been gone too long sweetie. Your putting all kinds of thoughts into my head.
    Such an erotic and sensual write. Mouth watering to say the least.

    Best of luck in the contest.

    Love You


    • Maxboy gold member
      February 19

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      Thank you so much sweetie, this was just for you.

      Love You


  • Serenity-words
    February 17
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    Wow, very erotic. I loved it, wonderful job!


    • Maxboy gold member
      February 22
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      Thank you so much for the Honorable Mention, I am so happy you enjoyed my write this much.

      Thanks Again


    • Maxboy gold member
      February 17
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • Callisto Athena gold member
    February 17

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    Good God! I need a loooong cold shower now! What a wonderful erotic take on a woman's point of view! Well done my friend!


    • Maxboy gold member
      February 17
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment sweetie, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    February 17

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    Loved this erotic write..... step by glorious step until climax.... tasty..!

    huggss
    becca


    • Maxboy gold member
      February 17
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      Thank you so much for your beautiful comment, I am pleased you liked it.



  • hotchocolate gold member
    February 15

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    Oh Ya!!!!!! This is great here from you and I so enjoyed this read! Good luck in the contest hon

    Firmly grasping her breasts in his hands, her hard nipples protrude between his fingers he pinches them and watches her pleasure as he squeezes. Pushing her breasts against his hands for leverage, she grabs his arms, their sweaty bodies gliding on one another in a rhythm of increasingly desperate pleasure


    • Maxboy gold member
      February 15
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      Thank you very much for your comment and applause sweetie, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.



  • Ademon
    February 15
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    WOW


    • Maxboy gold member
      February 15
      Edit | Reply
      Thank you so much for your comment and applause, I hope you liked my write.

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