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His Spirit Dwells

 

Among this world His Spirit dwells

calling out to all who'll hear,

longing for each one of us

to accept Him without fear.

 

His promise is for everyone,

we need only heed His call.

Though many will turn deaf ears,

wanting nothing from Him at all.

 

His love is unconditional,

He's full of mercy and grace.

 Those of us who let Him in,

will surely see His face.

 

Love, peace and patience,

kindness, joy and self-control,

are a few gifts of the Spirit

that will coalesce with our soul.

 

Just surrender to Jesus,

seek forgiveness in His name.

He'll cleanse us of every sin,

for at the Cross He took our shame.

 

 

 

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Artwork by Gilbert Williams

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  • ShelleyA gold member
    March 10

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    A very good write, message and interpretation of the picture prompt. Heartfelt. Good flow, rhyme and tone. Lovely depth of feeling and expression of faith. Very nice rhythm. Good word choice, nice alliteration and assonance. Thank you for your entry.


  • Sweet Jane
    March 2
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    woderful poem


  • queenie gold member
    February 24

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    another beautiful image that you have lent words to to give it life. the simplicity of this enhances the true beauty of the image and the words. the truth is simple and rewarding and that message shines in this. my best to you in the contest.


  • CountryCousin
    February 16

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    I ditto.

    I ditto the amen. This is so true and you put the words to the graphic as only you can do. This made for a lovely read tonight. I do applaud this one.


  • Frogzter gold member
    February 15

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    Amen! So very true and my prayer is that all will invite him in. The benefits after all are everlasting. This is beautifully crafted and well stated!

    Blessings,

    Frogz~

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