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Speak

It's been a while
A year or two
Life is blue
When no one is true

It burns 
When I open my mouth
It's so dry
Just like the desert

I just say quite
Cause I can't speak
I barley can breath

I want to say something
The hidden true
The secret that killed me
A secret that couldn't be told

They all hate me
Worst that an outcast
I guess you could say
But the truth can't be hidden forever
I have to let go
Tell them all so
I have to find my way
And finally speak.

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  • ninchick08
    February 15

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    I think if you made some spelling corrections this would be a better write. But the meaning is there.