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In The Beginning

 

Bright stars He placed with feathered Hand,
in skies of azure that were without light.
Each one caused the heaven's to expand,
to prove of His greatness and His might.
This beauty brought to His eyes delight,
as He looked with love across all the land.
Of His new creation He did write,
and of a world He solely manned.

Author notes

Artwork by Gilbert Williams

I know this is of merlin, I guess, but I saw God placing the stars one by one...beginning of this world. So, thus my write.
(even though I don't like the crystal ball...hehe)

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  • CountryCousin
    April 25
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    Still good.

    This is still good to read.


  • CountryCousin
    April 20

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    Congratulations.

    Congratulations on the gold. The poem surely deserved it. As always you capture the meaning of your subject.


  • MysticalRayne
    March 1
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    Beautifully done - worthy of the Gold congrats


  • ShelleyA gold member
    March 1

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    A beautiful write and interpretation of the picture prompt. 60 words exactly. Good imagery, flow, rhyme and tone. Lovely depth of feeling and expression of faith. Vivid descriptives. Very nice meter. Good word choice, alliteration and nice assonance. You paint a lovely picture of God and His creation. Thank you for your entry.


  • Frogzter gold member
    February 26

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    Penned with beauty, style and grace! I can see very well in the pic the inspiration for this wonderful piece! Well done my friend!

    Blessings and best wishes,

    Frogz~


  • queenie
    February 24

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    actually i can see how you were inspired to write these words because that is the way your heart sway. you are a writer from the heart and thus you are not only a very brilliant writer, but an emotional one. this is yet another beautiful piece from your heart. my best to you in the contest.

  • jodygirl
    February 15

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    How very beautiful. Your words fit the picture with quite a flair, Merlin or not. What a very special poem for this contest. My best to you there also. Those stars really light up the night skies don't they? Excellent write. Keep up the good work.
    In God's Love,
    Joan

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