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A fake friend

all those days
when we were
lauhing and giggling
playing together
how was i to know
that when you get tired
when youll get sick
when youll get the
most out of me
youll leave me all alone
in the big noisy crowd
in the dark chilly forest
in between the trees of depression
the one who you are with now
will one day cry to me
to tell me anout your unrelaiblity
cause you are a lie
an untrue person
and most importantly
a fake friend......

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  • pop123
    February 16
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    You've made it so sad...good work.


  • Slick99
    February 15
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    a fake friend

    i have had fake friends before. it's no fun at all. good job! , -Slick


  • Lanasaur
    February 15

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    WOW!

    this is really true and you described it really well i espescially like this line!youll leave me all alone
    in the big noisy crowd
    in the dark chilly forest
    in between the trees of depression
    the one who you are with now

    well done i love it!