light filters shade
blending as color
tracing eternity -
my love vibrates
echoes
written as whispers
In a list
A contest entry
- Happy Valentine's Day!! by Cynthia Gaines.
2100 points, ended February 20, 2009, 49 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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beautiful
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I accept your clappies
with grace. Frans
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So subtle, but the magnetism resounds, I can sense waves of such gentleness from one so in tune with himself.
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Thanks
malmadre, your comment is a sincere motivation. Frans
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nice
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Thank you. Frans
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down to earth...
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my love vibrates
echoes
whoa I heard it loud and clear
albeit written in whispers
this is beautiful
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estbelle
Whar a lovely aka name. Your comment is appreciated. Frans
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What a great job you did here! I love the soft gentle feel to this one, and the meaning hidden in your words! Gret job!
Congrats on the Honorable Win!
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Your comment
is appreciated. Thank you for reading. Frans
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Intriguing.
Wow. there's quite a lot here in not very many words. You've obviously chosen well and to good effect. A nice, tight write. Well done.
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I enjoyed
this write. I thought of my wife when I wrote this. Frans
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Congratulations on the HM. I was struck by how so few words could carry so much meaning. Whisper on my friend.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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Hi Leo
Thanks for the whispering encouragement. Frans
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Beautiful Sentiments...
Thank you for your wonderful Valentine's Day entry in my contest!! I'm wishing you all the best!! Peace, xx Cyn 
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Cyn
Thanks for the opportunity to enter, and more so the HM that I was awarded. This is grately appreciated. Frans
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Awesome!
I've been telling Frans, ever since I discovered him, that he is an incredibly talented writer; and, this short poem truly reflects that. However, everyone should read his short short stories. He is a natural talent with the ability to write in all 3 modes; which means that his work would reach an entire reading market as well as be vivid in imagery, sound, smell, emotion and tactile touch. Most writers do so in only one of the modes, the one in which they function; BUT, all three can be learned.
Excellent, dear Frans! Should be a GOLD winner.
Luv & hugs, BonQ
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Dear BonQ
With my wife in mind, and write about her will be a 'Gold'. I am proud of the HM, and appreciate the assessment made by Cyn. She is a great poet. Frans
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a wonderful depth in this expression of feelings, truly it seems to be eternal, boundless and forever...PK
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Thank you PK
your comments means very much to me. Frans
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Absolutley beautiful
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Thank you Stephen
your comment is appreciated. Frans
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Beautiful, so much said in so little words, i really liked this, great write!
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Also a beautiful name,
Kalamina - thanks for stopping by to read and comment. Frans
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This must be the day for short writes. With great craftsmanship you made this work. A big three for you.
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Much appreciated. Thank you for commenting. Frans
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lovely!
i love the short and sweetness of this!
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Glad you liked it. Thanks for the encouragement. Frans
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Nice, an explosive impact with so few words,
each syllable works and achieves beauty.
A lovely poem my friend!!!
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From you, Tirrell
Thank you! Frans
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so beautiful.
I loved "blending as color- tracing eternity -"
So good. ~Pamela 
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Ah, dear one,
thanks for the comment. Blessings to you. Frans
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