I know you can't hear me
So I'll talk to you through words
That you are the
greatest friend anyone could ask for.
There has been so much in my life
and you were there at every turn
When ever I fell
you caught me, over and over again.
Every hug, every touch
every kiss, I treasured.
Every moment I had with you
I'll never forget
from growing up together
to yelling at each other
to dropping you off
at the airport,
I'll never forget those memories.
Happy Valentines day
to the one girl that
never walked away.
I really do love you,
here take this,
but please don't break it.
I know you can't hear me
but I'm your biggest fan,
I respect and treasure you,
Thank you for everything darling.
Author notes
Happy Valentine's Day to my best friend.
A contest entry
- Creativity by TastetheLeprechaun.
475 points, ended April 6, 2009, 40 entries
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I love how you expressed your emotions, and I could feel them, which is great when you're a ready. You have a good talent, and keep up the good work. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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AWWWWWW!!!!!! Thank you so much Maxi! Im glad Im your valentine!
Miss you, be home soon, Month or more. We'll party! hug n kisses!
(reading what others wrote as a reply, YEP WE DID GROW UP TOGETHER!! Woo hoo!! Im thankful I always had you by my side, Glad you never walked away either Maxi. See you at the Airport once more.))
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awe =] really adorable poem. my best friend is also my girlfriend, so the two kinds of love i experience are directed at the same person. idk what it feels like to have a separate best friend to love O.o oh well
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This was really sweet. sometimes loving your best friend is the best love of all
I truly loved how pure and heartfelt this write you.. You really put a lot of emotion into this write! thank you veyr much for sharing! I truly enjoyed reading this!!!
Angel
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This is very sweet. I'm sure your friend will really enjoy hearing how much you appreciate their friendship. Valentine's day always seems to be full of confessions and heartfelt letters. It's nice..
"from growing up together
to yelling at each other
to dropping you off
at the airport,
I'll never forget those memories."
I like this.. it's like you grew up together, and then you parted at the airport and this poem is like bringing you guys back together.. maybe. awesome
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