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well honesty is the best policy

i can try it all again
i can play all those old songs
the ones that made sense
back then

i do feel the same
i feel that i can also remind myself why
while i am about it

i think i just did

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read to the backing of :http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bbv8d6tBFFI

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  • wendymolly
    March 1

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    The last line wrapped up the entire message here very cleanly. Your a finalist in the contest! Take care! Tand.