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Watching

Green eyes
Watching me again
Curious, cautious
Why don't you just ask me?
You know I'll tell you
Yet you seem content

Those questioning eyes
Wondering again
Digging deeper inside my head

There is no urgency
Only assurance
That there will be another chance

Blue eyes
Watching you again
I should just ask
I know you'll tell me
But I'm quite content
Being curious and cautious

These guessing eyes
Searching again
Digging deeper into you

Without saying a word
Knowing there will be
Another chance

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  • aaaaaaaa
    February 15

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    They always say that eye's are a portal to a person's thoughts and feelings. but they forget the concept of deceit. great poem.