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It's Just That The Time Was Wrong

so i meet this person
i ain't gonna say what it was
lets just say creature,
i meet this creature
don't get the wrong idea right
i think it all feels right
don't get the wrong idea
don't get no ideas bub
we ain't paid for ideas
not around here bub
no man take your ideas outside
i was trying to say,
oh, right...
so i met this one
and they
well it's easy to get the wrong idea
yeah too damn easy
what was i doing
fifteen years later
fifteen years later
watchin' Romeo and Juliet
on valentine's day?
an' getting the wrong ideas all over again...

Author notes

don't know what makes you laugh.... this ain't no virgin suicide
dipit

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  • islekine silver member
    March 4

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    Crazy write...

    I'm still wandering through your maze!!
    Take care...Best wishes in the contest and always!
    write on!


  • redbarchettadrive gold member
    February 15

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    Who knows where these alien ideas come from! Your name drew me in and your poem held me fast! Too cool!
    Go Mikey Phelps!