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Lonely Valentine's Day

This Valentine's Day
You just pushed me away
You left me alone in the dark
Now I'm in my room, listening to Linkin Park

I look at everyone else
I close my eyes and hear ringing bells
Wherever I go, I can't escape it
Whatever I do, I can't forget it

Every second, your breaking my heart
Every second your tearing me apart
I can't stand being away from you
Yeah, its true

But hey...
This is my Valentine's Day...

You're a living memory,
Why don't you quit hurting me
And stop pushing me away
'Coz this is my lonely Valentine's Day

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this doesnt even make sense does it?

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  • VERY GOOD PIECE AND IT MAKES A LOT OF SENSE, I LUVED READING IT TILL THE END THE STARTING TO THE END DO PENNED PENNED AND PUT THIS VERY WELL

    RF


  • Bohemianwriter
    February 16

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    no it does make sense, this is brill and very honest.
    my val's day was shitty too, mind you val's day isnt even real. its fake. so is love. i really liked this write. i hope you find someone out there for you, but know whatever feeling you have for that someone it wont be love, it may be a good feeling but it isnt love. love doesnt exist. its like santa clause. its nothing. a myth.

    This Valentine's Day
    You just pushed me away
    You left me alone in the dark
    Now I'm in my room, listening to Linkin Park

    loved that stabza lol. i was listening to linkin park too. the song "From The Inside". awesome song. u shud listen. but yh awesome write XXX