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If Only

If only you could see me now,
the monster you've created
and image of hurt and pain
constructed of feeble
lies.

If only you could feel,
the pain that rips through my
veins.
The sadness pumping like adrenaline...
towards my broken heart

If  only you could see
how ugly you truly are.

What do you think? Anything I can work on?

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