I am just writing a poem for you.
It may seem quite matter-of-fact,
until you fully open your eyes
and read the words of love
that are hidden there,
between its lines.
Words I see clearly
with my eyes shut.
A contest entry
- Prompt-seeing with your eyes closed-tell me what you see by usefuldistraction.
1100 points, ended February 21, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellent
Wonderful take on the prompt. So very creative. Congrats on the silver.
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penman
Thankyou for your complimentary comments, your congratulations and your very generous applause.
Best wishes from 'down-under'.
Shenton
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Nice work
This is a wonderful poem with so much to give in so few words good write.
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light to a dreamer
Thankyou for your very complimentary comments, and for your most generous applause.
Best wishes from 'down-under'.
Shenton
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Very interesting piece. It does seem quite matter of fact, and I like a the reference, to "between the lines! That is how so much is noticed! Very nice write!
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useful
Thankyou for your complimentary comments, and for your most generous applause.
Best wishes from 'down-under'.
Shenton
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