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musings

fairy musings
wings reflected
shadows fall on softest skin
i would love to
share your dreaming
would like to know
what thoughts within
but for me no time for dreaming
gossamer replaced by lace
paperwork surounds not leaves or ripples
no time for musings in this place
if for one moment
fantasy could rule
i would join you in a wink
laughter would echo
wings would flutter
(my colour preference would be pink)

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  • Sandygram silver member
    February 28

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    Now this was a lovely romp with the we fairy. A very lovely poem. Thank you for entering it in my contest. Best of luck to you. Take care, Sandy A delight to read. I think I would be a blue fairy and be inviable in the sky.


  • zhaniswolf
    February 19

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    I like how you added that you would like to be a pink fairy

    And I liked the way you worded everything as well.

    Thought I would return a comment, and give you some clappy points


  • Callisto Athena gold member
    February 17

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    Really delightful! Would that we could leave our, oh so mundane world, and join in for a fairy romp..

  • aaaaaaaa
    February 15

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    "share your dreaming
    would like to know
    what thoughts within"

    i think it would make more sense as:

    share your dreaming
    would like to know
    your thoughts within