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Caring's Not Enough

As people, we’re so far apart
that we can’t see beyond ourselves.
We know the truth within our heart
but keep it on the highest shelves.

The magic of a gentle touch,
the floods of joy when we’re in love,
can be a part of everyday…
can be a part of what we’re of.

We accept the pain we daily see
or simply turn our eyes away
instead of reaching out to care,
to attempt to find a better way.

It’s not enough to shake our heads
and mumble words of piety
or give some money to a group
for one more useless committee.

Start within your neighborhood
or even on the street.
Share a word of kindness
with a stranger that you meet.

We know the answer from within;
we know the Golden Rule.
Beyond the words, we need to act
for that is change’s fuel.



Author notes

Prompt: 12. "I'm not colorblind, I know the world is black and white." Stop This Train.
Picture Credit: http://gimpbeginner.deviantart.com/art/Caring-and-Compassion-87313306
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  • Truetome
    February 27

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    a commendable poem. one full of rich ideas for towards compassion, that which we all are in need. Love,


  • Jesann gold member
    February 16

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    A great message here...action creates change.
    A wonderful write full of truth, pointing out the choices we have, and the fact that "caring is not enough" to change things.
    A wonderfully inspiring write.
    Excellent pic !!


  • SilverSea
    February 15

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    I loved this. Beautiful and inspiring. I especially love the simplicity of the message. Sometimes a word of kindness is all you really need.


  • toomysterious
    February 15

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    A wonderful call to action. The world can be changed by such small simple things a smile, a hand, a touch. Great poem. Good luck.