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dark love off hearts

Missing image
dark heart
open holes of space and time
past the chain to gain a love
mist of clouds dust behind the
the open air of love and passion
that past on into a unknown of worlds
and space.

dark love of hearts and passion is
no longer and ideal romance for ones
love and passion.
the dark heart throws the passion out
into the wind as if it was nothing but old news
of the past times

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dark hearts of love

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    March 14, 2009

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    Well this is again the story you have depicted in hard emotional scenario..thought quite true ..well shared piece...


  • starjacket silver member
    March 12, 2009
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    Awesome job! The face looks like Angelina Jolie. I giggled when i saw that picture...Awesome job!


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 14, 2009
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    I think you did well with prompt.

    Best of luck.