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Only Dreaming

Waking up,
I open my eyes
To see you not here.
I pause for a moment.
Maybe I can still smell the scent of you.

Wishing madly,
“Come back to me”
I notice,
It all still seemed so real.
The touch of your hands,
The taste of your lips.
My heart pulsating madly,
Head screaming,
I”M IN LOVE

But still I lay here,
searching.
Eyes filled with tears,
I cry out your name
Why won’t you answer me?
Heart pounding in my chest,
I reach out for your soft touch.
Why won’t you come to me?

Sinking back into submission,
I realize,
You were never here.
I’ve wished and dreamt for you..
To be the person I want to have,
To touch me the way I want to be touched,
To kiss me the way I long to be kissed.
To make me scream out,
Heart pounding,
I love you
But still I’m here.
Alone.

Author notes

This a poem that I wrote for my significant other that was taken from me Dec. 9th 2008. I may not fully understand why yet, but with time I'll come to realize that it was probably for the best.

-You had to die at such a young age, and I'm sorry that I took things for granted and wasn't there to tell you goodbye. I love you with all my heart sweetie!

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  • A Poet Named Kyoto
    February 16
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    This poem almost brought me to tears. It is so powerful. Well done. Sorry for your loss.


    • Jugi5675
      February 17
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      just wanted to say thanks for the gold and thanks for taking the time to read my poem!