he goes to her
and tell s her he wants her
she is unfeeling
and undecided
but he goes for her
grabs her
and tells her
if i can't have you no one can
a fist full of hair
and he kisses her
hard
pulls her body into his
and starts making her feel
his unquenched desire
her back againt the wall
she remains timid and shy
but he still
pushes him self
on her
in her mind
slowly his hands fonlde and caress her breast
she is still
resilient
but she lets him take her
he pulls her shit off
and makes his way down her pants
kissing her hard
his finger slips inside
her wet pussy
he fingers her for a bit
licks and bites on her nipples
turns her arouns and proceeds to kiss her down her back
she is untamed
he pulls her pants down
spreads her legs
so she can feel his cock
against her
he begins to taunt her with it
and he is going to give it to her
she is giving in
the wall is coming down
the breaking is done
she gives in
to him
not knowing where it will lead
she allows him to take her
in all other ways
Author notes
hmmm figure it out!
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Love how its a story. Another steamy ride
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Wow, I haven't read one of your pieces in awhile. Very hot and excellent imagery. pulls the reader in. also the ending was great. it leaves the reader wondering what might happen next. Keep that pen flowing.
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i learnt from this that no doesnt ,mean no so when does no mean no i dont know now, but hell ill have a bit of that if she says yes. very rompy piece
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haha, one eued willie strikes again.. Very good.
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WHEW DAMN!!
But isn't that called something illegal?
nevermind, i love this hot write my friend, very hot!!
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what is illegal
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A rough seduction.Well written and pulls the reader into the story and carries the reader a long.
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Yowza! I can't type, my keyboard is too hot! Sizzling, actually. Nice to see something diffferent on here.
***Rae***
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Very very hot and sexy! You deffinately have me sitting at attention, now I am going to need a cold shower. Well done, very descriptive and pleasing to read.
-Garrett
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Sexy
I was shocked when I read this one because it is pretty tame for you. Very sexy though, it made me horny toward the end. (pun intended).
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oh ya which part?
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hi
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no I have not done this...they are words that is all.
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Like the entire journey!
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ya well i wish it would hurry up and get here already! hahahah! sanx for z comment. god how much longer do i wait! maybe i am suppose tobe alone for the rest of my life since i am how i am and so unfeeling and untamed! to wild for my own ways but maybe one day the right one will come along...and make we wanna...
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Its intense. Being a {{pet}} to a very loving forceful {{master}} myself, this poem speaks to me. Its fantastic. Very erotic and sensual at once, letting him take her in all other ways says to me that he has tamed the untameable. wonderful job! thank you for posting
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thank you for reading, Ya i guess at some point when the right one does come along, she will fall into himand everything will go in sync right. She will be ready to submit herself and embrace her fate...mamed and tamed!
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Ooh lala... now this is a playful piece
her submissive yet firm stance towards his advancement beyond naughty
I'll be figuring this one out all-day.LOL
This is like a surge of lustful energy demanding manifestestation upon the sleepy horizon's of this timid sunday morning
Very seductive and very enticing
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