Forging roads where boughs entwine
Twisting into deadly choke holds
I suffocate for you
That you might shine brighter
In a world with no sun
and no water
Living on the sustenance
that comes from within
Rich, I sow seeds of fortune
and water them with tears
I am LOVE
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A contest entry
- Quickie Now #17 by amaranthine lover.
400 points, ended February 17, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I really enjoyed reading this one.
Congratulations on a well-deserved silver. Now, this is a poem that I think that anyone with a pulse can relate to on some level. Your personification of love here is something that makes this piece stand out so well.
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I love it.
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What a nice surprise. Thank You for silver darling!
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