It was a cool february evening
a slight breeze was whistling through the trees.
In a little town just west of the Mississippi,
wings with his gold handled six shooters on his side had
just checked in a cheap motel outside of town.
He had been planning a caper that he was sure would
make the front page of ever paper in the country.
" The big Valentines Day Robbery"
He had sent ten invitations to the elite PNC group.
Telling them to meet Him at the Motel no later than
Feburary 12th.
To go over the plans for the big Valentines Day caper.
Early in the morning of February 12th. a message was
delivered to Wings.
It was from one of those that had been invited, Her Code name was Rosebud.
The Message read.
Dear Wings I am sorry I won't be able to make the caper this time.
I have met my matching Rosebud,and I am giving up the life of Crime
for Love and the possibility of raising a garden full of little Rosebuds.
Soon another message arrived, the message read.
Dear Wings I have met my Soulmate and when I told Him about the caper
He said if I Loved him I would give it up for him.
So I am giving up Crime sorry if Love has spoiled the caper.
Soon another message arrived and the message read.
Dear,Wings Sorry I won't make the Caper this time.
My dream Man has planned a heist of a Jewelery store on that night.
He wants to show me how much He loves me by heisting the
largest Diamond in the store.
I will miss the PNC group and all the fun we had with all
the Capers we pulled.
The Caper has been called off.
But Valentines Day is on it's way.
We will still celebrate this special day.
With all the comraderie with heart shaped boxes
full of candy.
Cards and presents expressing how we feel.
To all the PNC, Partners let me say with much appreciation
And our feelings we all know is true.
So " HAPPY VALENTINES DAY" from Me to You.
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NOTES
I have used all four of the original options.
Trading Crime for Love.
Crime spoiled by Love.
Crime in the name of Love.
The last part is my Valentine poem Minus the words-
( love kiss, hug )
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Happy Valentines Day to all.
wingsofgold25
Author notes
Hey not much of a Poem but hope you enjoy it anyway
A contest entry
- Partners In Crime Group Only... A Twist On Valentine's Day Contest by Partners In Crime.
1150 points, ended February 23, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Wonderful! Congratulations on the shiny Dad.
Mariana
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Very Creative
Good luck in the contest.
Countrybabe
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I didn't send you a message Wings...I guess I just lossed track of the route..
I am always driving into the wrong directions.
Next year I will be there...I am just going to bring my Tommie than...
XXJeannette
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shame on me for not noticing who wrote this...I have been so dog tired for several days...putting up a fence with a total of 45 post holes..too much for old fogies like us...two days ago I could barely move I was so tired...we are almost finished now...couple more days and will be able to let our dog Marshal out the door with out him running away...but any way, thank you for entering adn it was a great piece you entered..even if my original comment was short and lame...
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Dad...this is a wonderful poem written with such imaginative thought. I enjoyed reading this. Bravo! Good luck with the contest
I hope you had an enjoyable Valentine's Day
Mariana
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that was great...getting in all the options was a great caper even if the original one failed...Good luck in the voting...
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Ahhh, Ed, don't give up on our lives of crime. We all need a little distraction sometimes so we'll be back as soon as the new wears off. I don't think any of us can stay away from our life of crime for very long
This is a pretty cool write and you did a great job getting all of the options covered
Best of luck in the contest
Dee
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Well written, liked where you went with the word prompts and how one is lieft alone out in the cold fast when everything changes around them. In line 2 I saw beeeze did you mean b(r)eeze. and whisteling to whistling? Again nicely done. Blessings.
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tHANK YOU FOR THE NICE COMMENT MUCH APPRECIATED.
AND THANK YOU FOR POINTING OUT THE TWO "TYPOS"
I HAVE CORRECTED THEM.
HAPPY VALENTINES DAY
WINGS
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