-VERSE ONE-
Since the day you were born
You've been just a thorn
In my side and the pain
Is something I can't hide
You know you're just fake
Putting up a front to impress
But your mask will soon break
So lay the act to rest
-CHORUS-
Why can't you realize
Yourself you can't save
Because soon you'll see
Your lies will dig your grave
All these lies that you hold
The truth will shine through
The lies that you've told
Will be the end of you
-VERSE TWO-
Remembering when we first met
The day I will always regret
I hate what you've done
I hate what you've become
What could have happened
To change you this way
Just need to be yourself
What more can I say
Author notes
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"your lies will dig your grave" What a blunt line. Impressieve piece!
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I felt that the bluntness needed to come in waves in this piece, in order to properly get my message across.
I have a way with making words more than they appear to be, I guess?
Thanks, once again!
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Another awesome piece. It's a shame when people put on fake faces, instead of just being real. And it's also a shame that people can't see when something is good in life. I loved this. Well done.
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Yeah, I blame it on peer pressure, or if someone thinks a certain style is 'in', they will emulate it rather than be themselves.
Also discovering that it's much harder to be something they are not, rather than being themselves.
One of the many true joys of life is being yourself and being accepted for that, and not what you aren't.
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awesome4RL
WOW-ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL-DEFINITELY DEEP.
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Thank you!
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I have to admit, the lyrics were absolutely beautiful and had a lot of depth to them, they really did make me think and that really was great.
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Thank you! I did put a bit of thought behind these, it's not about anyone in general, just people that are fake. That's one trait of people I really can't stand. Well, anyway...thanks!
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Wow, I liked this one, it had depth and beauty and really told a great story. Nice format too.
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i like these lyrics from you. thank you for sharing thiem with me today and i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie
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Thanks! I appreciate the comment. I haven't written in a few years, so I wasn't sure how well this would go, but apparently I've still got it! Once again, thank you!
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