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Close My Eyes

I stand alone,
Against a world unknown,
A scared and broken heart.

I close my eyes,
Erase the lies,
Trying to restart.

I unmask my face,
Cannot replace,
The beaten and bruised soul.

I hold my chest,
A heart confessed,
Trying to mend the hole.

I dream awake,
Of my mistake,
And remove my disguise.

The bad is still bad,
And just as sad,
When I close my eyes.

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  • Lady Juliet
    February 20
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    Thank you!


  • light to a dreamer gold member
    February 18

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    This is a great write

    This is a great write with so much meaning with its own way of making anyone who reads it feel your pain and there heart brake for you as well! I need not wish you luck cause I feel you have already won! nice work


  • usefuldistraction
    February 15

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    Liked the rhyme scheme in this piece, smooth, nicely lyrical and unforced off the tongue! Thank you for entering!

  • Lady Juliet
    February 14
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    Thank you so much. Comments like that inspire me


  • freespirit51
    February 14

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    Sweet piece. I loved it alot. I can see the meaning behind your words and some of them touched me deeply..Great piece and good luck in the contest.

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