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Repulsive Love

 

My love blazes


deep like the aphotic abyss of Ancient Acheron

 

as gloomy as a decaying rose

 

my still beating heart do I give unto thee

 

my disturbed love, aching, bleeding, loving, deceiving

 

thus it will be our darkly romantic night.

 

 

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  • badnovocaine
    February 22
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    Oh nice, I can't believe you still don't have any others
    This is really good, dark vibe to it, but its that edge that counts!!


    deep like the aphotic abyss of Ancient Acheron
    as gloomy as a decaying rose

    How did you come up with that, its a brilliant metaphor.