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His Fury

Missing image


it cracks
  (cackles)

blistering retributions
char her beauty

reprimands
must be heeded

this eternal hell
cannot be avoided


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Day Break by Ray Caesar

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  • leander Moderators member
    March 9

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    This is short, and provides enough food for thoughts to let it linger a bit in the mind...

    Very well done!
    Thanks for the entry
    Leander