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I love you

I love you smile,
Your hugs,
and your kiss.

I love you standing by me
Holding me tightly  
Telling me you love me so

I love you light eyes,
Your tall body,
You shiny brown hair

 

You make me smile

All the time

You make me laugh

When I see your eyes

Now all I want to say today

Under the moon light is

"I love you for ever and ever!"

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  • TokyoMewMewIchigo
    February 18
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    I LOVE IT GREAT JOB!!!


  • Angelic Princess21
    February 14

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    aww this is a really sweet poem. it shows alot of love in it. You have wrote a very nice love poem here. Keep up the amazing work hun
    ~Angelic Princess~