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Our Physical as Vessels

 

 

 Floating in serenity,

   such peace!,

 

waves may buffet

  but my soul shall warrant my lips

to consistantly wisper, "I love,

I love, I love,

 

thank the Lord

 our God

I can love!"

 

 And the love inside

    calms the soul.

 

   The storm won't end,

no, this world shall forever

 fight itself for control of itself,

but nothing

 

 

   nothing

 

 

  could ever

 

 

     ever

 

 

hinder me from riding out with 

the One who is Love,

from proclaiming Him,

from sharing space in the boat

with any survivors.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    February 15

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    So true and so inspiring poetry bringing the calm and the hope around the words..well done ..and thanks for sharing this piece..