Her skin glistens with
shimmering drops of rain
that reflect the jealous sun.
Prisms of radiant ecstasy
emanating from her/
pure bliss enveloping her/
time slowing:to a halt.
The heavy beads of water
dangling from the ends
of her limp hair
will never meet the earth below,
a bold smile;
red lips white teeth.
Complete happiness that will never fade
forever captured
through a lens;
a secret lovers tryst
between woman and rain.
Author notes
love and rain
A contest entry
- Can You See What I See? by toomysterious.
575 points, ended February 16, 2009, 20 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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An absolutely stunning vision, I am impressed. Not at all what I expected.
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