My love, My love, why do you cry?
on a mountain hill so very high, you explain to me that you'll always hide
Just the same as when the sun sets at the end of each day
Then the moon come out of hiding in shame
My love, My love, why are you afraid?
Have i dont something to hurt you, in any way...
Or is it about me...
The blood is rushing through my viens and seems as if will stop
My love, My love, talk to me, why do you hide?
You stay upon the mountain hill, as a tear runs from your eye
I told you that i will always be there
And never just pass you by
We will always be together
Dry those tears in your eyes
Author notes
this is a dedication to XxDarKxX
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Comments
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great dedication. you've made an 18 for this poem bringing your total to a 57. thanks for entering and best of luck to you. kahy
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Very nice write...
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thank you!
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