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The real me

I'm too lonely
But so in love
He woun't even look my way

Why can't people see
Behind this face
There's beauty every where

Why do I have to live this way
I'm just as good as you
I'm human
Just like you
So why does everything
Have to be
All about how you look

Why can't he see
The real me
Not how I look
But how I feel.

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  • darlintlc silver member
    February 20

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    Looking for the beauty inside is something we often overlook. Taking the time to know someone will change how you see them.

    Thanks for entering


  • Rovingone gold member
    February 16

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    That's so true. It is horrible how surface beauty is all the eye can see so often. It makes you wonder how many beautiful souls are expiring behind the facad of plain features.


  • Rain777
    February 14

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    well, dont just the book by its cover...
    I believe you are good
    and those who love you will see
    the beauty inside though
    the outside may not so pretty ...

    cheers
    thanks for sharing & success in your contest