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Wishes

when you're very lonely.
I wish you love.
When you're down.
I wish you joy.
When you're troubled.
I wish you peace.
When things are complicated.
I wish you simple beauty.
When things are chaotic.
I wish you inner silence.
When things look empty.
I wish you hope and everything nice.
For all the time in your life.

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Written February 21st, 2004

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  • Swingdancer01
    December 6, 2004
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    Gj

    That is so sweet I could say it in better words then how you explained it.

  • Laume
    September 23, 2004
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    i like this loads its sweet and i wish you the same I love this good write Laume xxx


  • Lioness
    March 7, 2004
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    Ah, girl, this is sweet. I like/liked it alot. you are a great poet.
    Lovies Always,
    Chea

  • msjct06
    February 21, 2004
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    oh thats so sweet no offense but this should be a hallmark card...or however you spell it..this is so cute...i might send it to a friend! good work! je t'aime au revoir