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The Bakery comes alive



Early morning.  The lights flicker on in the bakery and the hum of the neon fills the empty air.

The oven silent, responds to the old lever switch, a clack and the ferris wheel begins to turn inside, heat already erupting out, warming the room, bringing life into my still sleepy form.

Retrieve a huge steel bowl from under the hard wood table with it's steel pipe legs, bolted to the floor and pull the bins from under the side board counter. I let the scoop bring up flour, so full of the scent of fresh ground wheat, bring down a can of gluten to bulk it up and the cracked grain from the walk in refrigerator. There is the secret sour sponge hiding behind the rye emulsion and I snake it out, no one's watching, I'm alone, but I still feel like a magician guarding his secret magic from prying eyes.

That sour, built of old bread dough, vinegar and scraps from last weeks puff pastry, goes in to the bowl and I work it all into a bubbling rue. Then I bring out the cakes of yeast. How I love the smell and a big brass colored can of egg yolk and another of whey and buttermilk. One last turn with a big wooden spoon and I carry it all to the mixer, pour it in  crank it up to the dough hook and watch the slow turn, adding more bread flour and shake or two of salt as the metal bites through the dough and forms it into a final ball.

Carry the heavy bowl to the table dashed with flour and empty the contents. Yes, the oven is hot now, and I  cut, weigh and kneed the dough into balls, give each a final pat and toss it on the baking sheet. Three sheets of hearth bread ready to go are set in the proof box. 

 

While I wait, I pour my first cup of coffee and drag out the cookie dough from the ice box. A greased spoon cuts through the oatmeal raison dough I made the night before and I pop in one pan after another. And, ah, the scent is soon cinnamon and raison and oatmeal. By the time I pull them out and begin to slide the bread pans in their place the place is rosy warm and filled with those sweet scent, all to be over powered by the lucious aroma of bread baking.

I turn on the lights in the bakery shop window and place the first cookies out. A few more minutes and the jangle of the door bell will announce the early bird customer evenas the first rainbow red streaks crisscross the morning sky. This is the best time of the day. Those few minutes before you have to race back to work, turning out orders and the elements of fresh baked bread permeating the air, the still warm cookies behind the glass and the richness of coffee as you sneak one for yourself. If heaven isn't like this, I don't know why I'd even want to go there.

 

 

Author notes

I do love baking! And, I hope you have the very best of times. All this made me think of those wonderful hours in the bakery, when I was the first in, getting everything ready in the shop for those first morning orders.

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  • azlyn gold member
    March 11

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    YUM...YUM!!! This is so wonderful! I could just smell the delightful scents wafting about so early in the morning. I love to bake home made breads...yeast is one of the best smells I can think of. I loved this look into your bakery...into your life...thank you for sharing this with me...now where is my cookie??? LOL!


  • Dancing Feather gold member
    February 26

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    Fresh smell of bread, cookies, cinnimon buns, and ect. first thing in the morning. I'm there to help!!! I really enjoyed reading about you're experiences in a bakery. Thank you for your entry, Good Luck in the contest.



    Dancing Feather


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    February 21
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    well, you cooked us up a cracking taste tingling piece here, but as you said, 'but I still feel like a magician guarding his secret magic from prying eyes.' and you were right,, all this glorious talk of goodies freshly baked and warm coffee and not a recipe in sight,, bakers half to be salesmen too, and boy, did you do good. Sold me,, what times the shop open..?

    Well doughn..



  • klassy lassy
    February 15

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    You worked as a baker? How did you stay so trim? I'm totally envious! Ed, my mouth is watering reading this. I love the smell of fresh baked bread and cinnamin rolls. And cookies are simply decadent. I never did get the cinnamon roll I wanted yesterday.

    I was in a pizza shop last week and watched a young man cut an form balls of pizza dough. What an urge to touch it!. I make bread once in a while and always have such fun with it, reveling in the elasticity. It must bring out the kid in me.

    Karen


    • Silent Cougar Moderators member
      February 21
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      adjusts christmas list,,,

      'Karen - Play dough'

      • klassy lassy
        February 21
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        Mike! I thought you had forgotten me! Play dough for Christmas is not nearly as delectable as cinnimon rolls, bread, or cookies.


  • Sandygram
    February 15
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    Yummy Write!!!!!!!!!!

    Hi Ed, This was a wonderful trip back in time for me. Worked in a bakery for several years. It was so nice. The smell alone was worth going to work everyday. I still love to bake. Thank you for sharing these wonderful words. Such a pleasure to read this Sunday morning. Think I will stop at the bakery after church. You take care,

    Hugs and Smiles. Sandy

    • Silent Cougar Moderators member
      February 21
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      Sandy,
      You decorate our every morning with your welcome wishes and daily decorations,, I'd love to see the cakes you bake up, the decorations must be perfect,,


  • BonnieQ silver member
    February 14

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    Oh, yum, yum, mmmm!

    Wow, my brother Ed! You really brought the bakery alive for us. I could smell the various delicious scents of yeast and cinnamon, see every move you made from the time you walked in until placing the first patch of cookies in the window. And, then, the doorbell chimes. Geesh! Wish it had me that walked through that door.

    Excellent writing, full of imagery along with scents and sounds: this is what it means to write in all three modes in order to reach all of the reading market. There were a couple of things: one would be to remove the excess use of 'the,' especially in the opening paragraph, which gives a piece a hissing sound; and, somewhere further into the story, there is a run-on of two words.

    Minor issues, considering you met all the critical components of being considered a polished writer. Now, I need to find the nearest bakery!

    Much luv & hugs, SisBon


  • Denerica
    February 14

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    Wonderful

    Now I am hungry now...there goes the diet, you always write so fluent words and imagery that makes it come to life. Blessings.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    February 14

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    Oh this is just delicious! You really used such wonderful imagery to create the ambience of the bakery in the wee hours. I was mesmerised by this whole piece. Just wonderful.
    Best wishes in the contest.
    Gaylene

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