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The Essence

I stand upon the rise,
Next to mother nature's steadfast creations.
The rough bark of the tree scrapes along
My fragile skin as I caress my mother's gift
To this Earth.

Leaves of pure emerald tickle my cheeks,
Lulling me to close my eyes and dream.
Taking a deep breath, I press against them,
Encouraging the reaching innocent greens
To envelope me in safety.

Dropping to my knees,
My hands splayed out beside me in the grass,
The little dancing magnetic tendrils
Pull at me;
Encourage me to draw into the soil
And rest in its rich embrace.

I regain my tall height,
My proud stance of the goddess I am.
There the wind touches me,
Asking me to waltz through the sky,
Holding its delicate hand.

However I must resist.

I close my eyes and build up the power within me,
Until I feel I should burst.
Then I release my built up energy
To feed the nature and give life.

My essence drifts off into the world,
Where I am finally free to dance with the wind,
Delve within the soil,
And make love to the trees.

Mother Nature's daughter
It is forever my duty
To continue on my mother's beginning
And let the Earth prosper.

Author notes

ShiningNShadows

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Picture credit: http://www.gilbertwilliams.com/images/MysticalBlessing-2000.jpg

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  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    February 27

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    I close my eyes and build up the power within me,
    Until I feel I should burst.
    Then I release my built up energy
    To feed the nature and give life.

    Love this. :]

    Thanks for the entry


  • jcat gold member
    February 25

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    Love that last stanza!!! I try to do what I can to perserve our Mother Earth as well!! You penned a powerful piece and yet a gentle reminder to take care of our most precious resource!! Wonderful job and thank you for your entry

  • SuicideTree
    February 24
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    I really liked the imagery in this piece, I thought you really made it come alive.


  • penman gold member
    February 20
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Serenity-words
    February 16
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    Beautiful

    Wondeful imagery, and just a beautiful write. Great job, and good luck in my contest!


  • Callisto Athena gold member
    February 14

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    What a delightful piece this is, full of astonishing imagery of earth and sky and goddess.. I truly enjoyed this very much!


  • StarEyes
    February 14

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    What a wonderful read this is! I love the images this paints in my mind as I am reading! Such a soothing read this is! Great job!

    Best of luck in this contest!


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    February 14
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    good from start to conclussion, thank you for sharing, good luck
    mm


  • Denerica silver member
    February 14
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    Love the title and ending...beautiful imagery to the picture prompt. Blessings.

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