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Extremes

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in the heat of the night
he lays the tumbler
on her naked belly



she moans and sighs
arching her back in anticipation

 

red nails extract ice
slowly, deliberately
sweat and brandy fuse,
her skin … a sweet nectar

he tongues, licks, teases
nipples, iced and hard

 

 
another cube defrosts
her essence and brandy mingle

tonight he will satiate his thirst,
he will taste ambrosia

even the gods would envy

 


tonight she will be both
ice and fire

 

 

extremes

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Prompt is the picture.

Credit to Mick Payton-Ice

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  • Debbydoes
    November 24
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    exquisitely seductive!


  • Diminished Capacity gold member
    November 3

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    Wow, this has left me breathless. Absolutely love it, so I thank you for entering.


  • Pattiboo silver member
    October 24

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    Who would have thought such a sweet innocent looking girl (your avatar) could have such erotic thoughts ..

    congrats on the silver


  • JinSays gold member
    October 4

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    Oh Sue, Im so glad you've come along to play. this shall be a good contest I hope. I've a few lovely ideas working right now, as we speak. Welcome to the second round, wait for it, it's coming. I promise. (that's what Im telling everyone
    Love to you, beautiful lady,
    jin


  • Pure Thought silver member
    September 24

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    Hot entry! Like the classy attitude of your eroticism.

    buddy


  • Edie gold member
    September 23

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    Hot sexy and so tasteful at the same time. A real pleasure to read...


  • Eric Marsh
    July 9

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    mmmm

    tell you what i think......i think if i'd have met you at the isle of wight your name would be marsh lol.......


  • Myrtle Thomas
    June 16
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    Excitingly Beautiful

    I only wanted more erotic but with such great taste

  • dx d by me
    May 15
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    Beautifully painted night dancing...the sensuality is perfectly toned and balanced. Geo

  • Thor-201
    April 5
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    Amazing writing, you paint quite a picture here.


  • Emmyb gold member
    March 14

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    fab

    a fabulous entry. soft and erotic. I can feel the ice on me. well done and thanks for entering. favourite part was

    red nails extract ice
    slowly, deliberately
    sweat and brandy fuse,
    her skin … a sweet nectar

    so beautiful. xx


  • Ithica silver member
    February 16

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    Good Lord you have my mind drowning in the run-off and I have this sudden craving for Brandy too!!! This is about as hot as one can get!!! OOO-LA-LA!!! Congrats. on the Silver Cup!!!


  • JinSays gold member
    February 16
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    Ha, I read your comments and had a good snicker, they just dont know your smoldering hot pen as well as I. This is not only hot, but simply beautiful. Tasteful, and ohso delicious.
    Yum.
    Love,
    jin


  • SomeonesToySoldier gold member
    February 15

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    .... Um Ms Sue.... Wow.... Its really great. Very sensual, and it gives me ideas for future loversas well. hey a guy can pick up tips and tricks from anywhere. Love the pic, its a great entry into the poem and compliments it well. Great poem!


  • Thomas Scott gold member
    February 15
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    Yikes!

    That is hot, hot, hot. And I can't even drink the brandy.
    Good luck in the contest, Sue.


  • arafura gold member
    February 15
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    It's a warm night tonight...


  • hawkeslake gold member
    February 15

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    OKay, Another WOW!

    Sue, I think I have got to stop reading your poems before I try to go up to bed -- I suddenly find I'm awake! This deserves several trophies. Lovely and erotic and memorable. Lita


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    February 14

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    Well done. I like the visuals you used to illustrate the extremes in this poem. It is a very sensual poem.

    Great job.

    Mike


  • The Poetic Angel
    February 14

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    wow ...Sue this is just so ........

    Iwish I was the fire and ice for the night

    ~Ju ~


  • Ceridwens Soul silver member
    February 14

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    Tasty, very testy! OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH ya ya ya!!!!

    Sis this is um ya it just is

    Jem

  • Bruce silver member
    February 14
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    Very well done! Nice composite of fire and ice themes.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    February 14

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    Hot!!!!

    (and cold!)

    You naughty girl, it must be Valentine's day



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