I continue to drown
As you reminisce
About old times
Back home...
If I could go into the future
Build a time machine
And launch myself to back then
Oh...
I wish I could
Though the timey wimey stuff would kind of get in the way
But oh well
Because I would have loved to see you there
When you were "screwing up"
But having a good time
I would have loved to see you blush
When you realized that kissing had nothing to do
With losing your virginity
I just would have loved to have seen you
Been your shoulder to cry on
Been your guardian angel
Outside of you dreams
But time is now
Not then
So I take a breath
And hold you tight
And continue wishing...
Author notes
Would you... go back in time?
Write about something you would like to go back to.
Because I love my fiance and wish I had met him so many years ago, but back then, 6 years would have been a really big difference anyway...
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Comments
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I love this poem. There's so many people who i wish i could travel back in time to see. It would be great, but sometimes i'm glad i can't.
Thanks for sharing.
Keep writing,
Holly.
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Awwwwww...that is so sweet. Just be thankful you have him now and make memories you can remember together. I sometimes feel the same way with my relationship as well...Great write and good luck...
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