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I've Won

A tortuous winding path,
life's a confusing place to be.
I want to get away from the stress.
and find the real me.
Why can't I be happier?
Today's a brand new day.
Yet I have thoughts and memories that won't go away.
I think of my life and that my problems aren't so bad,
but for some unknown reason I still feel kind of sad.
Then I think of you and all that you've done.
Life's a competition and because of you,
I've won.

-Shelby

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  • Valley Girl silver member
    February 16

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    Welcome to All Poetry

    A truthful write. Sometimes our mind will stop us from being happy some days. We should always try to ignore that and enjoy life as much as we can. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    February 15

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    Life is something we should all strive to do our best in, we get one shot. Do what makes you happy.

    An interesting thought provoking write.

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