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babygirll

Time after time you say
tell me how you really feel
So read this past halfway
To see what there is to reveal!

I love looking at you
Your smile always puts one on mine
Your eyes glistening like the morning dew
Your body is my sacred shrine.

Now I know I don't say it as much
But I really, really, do love you
Smile for me when you get to the end
I hope I made you start to tear. :]
I love you babe.

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