All your vibrant words
are the smallest gems within
a landfill full of reasons
why I’m globally warming,
whenever you are near.
Again the ice is melting
as the atmosphere heats,
an extinction level event,
imminent greenhouse effect,
depleting all my oxygen.
A system of extremity,
calm to tornado turbulence,
raging storms quickly rise
within a sunny day,
when you breathe on my skin.
Ecology of passions
where you are the weather
wildly out of control,
sweeping my body, the land,
in a display of nature unleashed.
Author notes
Title Prompt: 'An Ecological Example'
Bet you didn't think I was going to take the title prompt in this direction? lol
A contest entry
- Title Temptation by xxRainbowDawnxx.
500 points, ended March 5, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this is a lovely write but i get so cross when i see contest entries and the only comment is from the contest holder, how very sad especialy as this was a trophy winner too
very annoying that other entrants didnt even bother to swop reads they missed out on an exelent write 
..their loss !
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Many thanks. Yeah, I know what you mean. I get very few comments at all on most pieces, apart from the contest holder (if it is a contest) or one or two from faves.
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Okay, no problem.
Title: An Eccological Example
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