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Razor's edge

It's glints in the light
Something you'd never expect
coming from a girl who's not so soft spoken
outgoing and critical

Using a razor to cure the inner pain
The razor's edge soothes until you cut too deep

what does it really mean

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  • Never Known
    May 3

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    Words more powerful than you know....

    Played out like a descreption of my life... this poem explains what I'm going through now... NOW as my life is falling apart I love this poem. I absolutly adore it.


  • redbarchettadrive gold member
    March 16

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    This sounds like such a sad and painful way to live Alexis!
    The title drew me in, seeing that it is the title of an AC/DC album also.
    A fine line of a write Alexis!
    Kudos!