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[ My writing sucks ]

My writing sucks
like a rusty hinge
stuck, bits of grit
filter down, brown
shavings of disuse
-neglect
to lose something,
to watch it slip
through my fingers
I gave up
got discouraged
lost the sense of worth
why struggle and fight
only to be judged?

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