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Icons I Hate.

I will fall away,
Never gonna see your face.
I’m bleeding,
I’m falling,
I knew that you were gonna bleed me dry,
But I let you win this time.
I let you suffocate this heart of mine,
But not again,
Not ever again.

Memory falls into pass time,
Border line hobby,
Something I never do
But tell myself that someday I will.

Love, something that’s never there,
Something that resents me,
Something I hate more then this life over all.

Warmth, something I’ve never had,
Had something I use to love,
Something I wanted more then anything,
But now it’s just like love to me,
Hated, resented, hung from rope.

Death, something I’m waiting for,
Helping time out,
Bleeding me slowly,
Waiting to see only black in me.

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  • JulietteArielle
    June 19, 2009
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    Wow this is amazing, and it reminds me a lot of a darker part of my life. Amazing write.